How to improve writing (no. 87)
In today’s Mark Trail, some dialogue in need of improvement.
Orange Crate Art
How to improve writing (no. 69)
Writing that represents the speech of someone fleeing an erupting volcano should exhibit greater terseness, greater urgency.
How to improve writing (no. 61)
Omit needless words, Mark Trail.
How to improve writing (no. 57)
When you speak in speech balloons, save some helium.
How to improve writing (no. 55)
Improving Mark Trail.
How to improve writing (no. 54)
Improving Mark Trail.
How to improve writing (no. 46)
Fixing another Mark Trail speech balloon.
How to improve writing (no. 44)
Mark Trail and “however.”