How to improve writing (no. 118)
“What’s in Store for the Future of Higher Education?”: that’s the subject line in an e-mail from The Chronicle of Higher Education .
How to improve writing (no. 58)
“The current investigation is ongoing.”
Unnecessary clarification
“This is our eight-to-fourteen-day forecast — it looks beyond the seven-day.”
“Rain umbrella”
As opposed to . . . ?
Unnecessary repetition
Taste AND flavor!
Unnecessary repetition
From a newspaper article